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Thirteen people in a room, one is from heaven and another from hell.
The other eleven are somewhere in-between.

If their are only six, beware the dog!
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I have to agree with Lady Bethsheba.  This is quite cleverly written, as in a riddle.  It gives us food for thought.  If you take time to really ponder it, I think the meaning becomes a bit more clear, but I do appreciate you going into detail in the comment.  It makes it more...what is the word I am looking for...lately my brain just does not want to work.  I am getting quite old and senile it appears.  ::big sigh::  I guess what I am trying to say and not saying very well, I'm afraid, is I see more than one viewpoint here, both in the comments of others, and in your own. :)  Well done!  Poetry is meant to make us think, and this poem does it very well.  :D